Blog Post #4

A.) Going into high school I was petrified; I mean who wouldn't be? Its a whole new adjustment from middle school, and a lot of older kids. One Literacy sponsor though that I was able to meet my freshman year was Mrs.Grosso. She was my language arts teacher my freshman year and she was able to teach me so much. Not just in the classroom, but how to get involved in high school. As well as life lessons, for instance telling me to prepare myself for the SAT and ACT. Another way
Mrs. Grosso was able to support me and help me, was she nominated me for my high school's leadership team. I was so surprised, and it was a great feeling. Then due to her nomination I was able to make the leadership team that ended up changing my life forever. In the classroom though, Grosso was able to teach me so much about writing, and language in general. She was able to help me improve my writing tremendously taking time with me after school. The time she took to spend with me after school really meant a lot to me.

Justification Statement

Overall, domestic violence is a crisis that is present in todays American sports world. The solution I have in plan is the best because it assures that fewer domestic violence charges will occur. Due to the amount of new penalties implemented for example like fines, educational classes, and even a ban from a sport; players will think twice about committing one of these charges. Yet, if they do repeat these charges, and do not learn at all then they could be banned from the sport, or suspended indefinitely. Resulting in them leaving the sport for a sufficient amount of time. A counter argument could be that these harsher penalties implemented could cause an uproar from players due to the tougher penalties: specifically a ban from football. A ban from football would only occur if these players repeat as offenders, if players repeat the same charge then they are not learning anything. Thus the player should not be tolerated within the sport. Most people regarding domestic violence I can assure you would rather see less of the crime rather than more. The benefits of these new consequences could be monumental. Some results could be a dramatic decrease with domestic violence within American sports, as well as a huge increase in the education of domestic violence, and how it can be handled properly. Domestic violence is a violent and unfair crime that shouldn’t be committed in any relationship between two partners. My solution will change the American sports world for the better, butt it won’t make domestic violence disappear. My solution will only be able to lower the amount of domestic violence cases in the American sports world, and help raise awareness.

Challenge Check in #2

MEMO

To: ENC1101, University of Florida
From: Nicholas Alvarez, student <nicholasaalvarez@ufl.edu >
Date: November 17, 2014
Re: Challenge check in #2

As of now the challenge I was given is going very well. Recently I was able to watch “Runaway” by Kanye West, and “Picasso Baby” by Jay Z.  I have been able to analyze both videos very well, and it has been very intriguing.

Both videos display hip-hop in different ways. In Kanye’s video he displays hip-hop with bright colors, and a very interesting mysterious story. While Jay-Z’s video displays hip-hop as an art. He also shows how he interacts with his audience, and how larger or smaller settings differ. Both videos are very different in showing their opinions of hip-hop.

Yet both videos are able to complement themselves still. They are able to show how hip-hop is a kind of art. Also how hip-hop is very expressive; hip-hop allows anyone to be able to express themselves in anyway they would like.

10 solutions to Domestic Violence

Practical Solutions

1. Harsher penalties in the sports world: Most athletes don't receive penalties that are very harsh. Most athletes may get a certain amount of game suspensions. While they should be fined, and not be allowed to play until their issue is resolved. 
2. community service: People who commit domestic violence could also receive community service. This could help them open their eyes and give back to the community, and realize their wrongs.
3. Longer jail time: A way to help lower domestic violence cases could be a longer jail time. This would help create a sense of being more strict with the issue.
4. Create a class to educate individuals on domestic violence: The last practical solution could be an educational class on domestic violence. This could help make people aware of what leads to domestic violence, and how serious it really is. 

Multimedia

1. Tv Commercials: Tv commercials about domestic violence is starting to be a solution today. This helps get the word out that domestic violence is a problem nationally. 
2. Advertise the problem on social media: Social media is a great tool we have that we can use that can help advertise domestic violence. We can use twitter, or any sort of social media to spread knowledge about domestic violence.
3. Create a Domestic Violence Website: A domestic violence website could also be a great assets to help solve the problem. The website could contain facts about domestic violence, and help create awareness.

Research

1. Research into why Domestic Violence occurs: Researching about domestic violence could be a great solution, because we could find out why domestic violence really occurs. Once we find that out we could try to really find a great solution.
2. Research into where domestic violence mostly occurs: Another solution could be researching into where it actually happens. If we find where domestic violence usually occurs then we can help create a plan at that place to help avoid domestic violence.
3. Research the behaviors exhibited by people who commit domestic violence: Lastly, if we find out the behaviors of people who exhibit domestic violence then we can find a solution to that behavior. For instance anger a certain person could then take anger management classes. 

Problem Statement

Recently, many cases of domestic violence have become apparent in today's society. Mainly from professional sports players in the NFL(National Football league),and also the NBA(National Basketball association). First off Domestic violence is a case where a person is abusive, or violent to their partner in a relationship. The first incident that became well known publicly was the Ray Rice domestic violence case. Ray Rice and his wife Janay were in an elevator arguing. Janay pushed Ray causing him to get upset, leading to Ray striking her with a punch causing her to pass out.  Since then many new cases have become well known around the country. For example, San Fransisco 49ers football player Ray McDonald experienced a domestic violence case as well due to his abusive behavior against his fiancee. Also in the NBA, former Miami Heat player Greg Oden allegedly beat up his ex girlfriend. These certain cases should never be acceptable, and should result in harsh penalties. Domestic violence though is not only caused by professional sports players, domestic violence is a world wide problem. Domestic violence is an inexcusable problem resulted typically from men. The cause of domestic violence is due to uncontrollable anger exhibited by these professional sports players, or any man across the world. Also, another reason why domestic violence is becoming more apparent is the lack of discipline these players receive. Ray McDonald in the end had no charges placed against him, resulting in him walking away with no punishment. The NFL, NBA,  or even the federal government needs to implement harsher penalties. Some ways to solve domestic violence could be harsher penalties, anger management classes, or even therapy for someone who experiences anger easily. Domestic Violence needs to be stopped it goes against every ones right of healthy everyday living. Once domestic violence is solved typically men will not have a bad reputation anymore. Also, the NFL or NBA wouldn't be as looked down upon anymore because of the harsher penalties implemented. Resulting in hopefully less cases of domestic violence.

Research Report 3 terms

1. Self-efficacy= Strength of ones belief in their own ability to complete a task or goal.
2. Pedantic= often ostentatiously learned.
3. Modality= A way or mode in which something is done.

Proposal Ideas

1. Isis
2. Ferguson, Missouri
3. Marijuana should be legalized? or not?
4. Domestic Violence
5. FSU recent legal issues
6. Ebola
7. Global Warming
8. Obesity
9. Unemployment rate
10. Drug Abuse

Evaluation Essay Sources

Looking Ahead in Cancer Stem Cell Research - This is article is going to be able to help me with the body paragraph I have of speaking about how stem cell research could be the answer to cancer. This article contains a lot of factual information about the subject.

Stem Cell Research - I chose this article as well because it gives a definition of what Stem cell research is. This article is able to explain what can be cured from stem cell research, and what can not be cured from it. Also, it describes the feelings people around the world have about stem cell research. This article contains so much factual information that could be useful.

Blog post #3

A. Theres one artist that always takes me back to my childhood every time I hear her sing and that artist's name is Gloria Estefan. Gloria Estefan is very well known all over Miami and around the country due to her Cuban background. My dad listened to Gloria Estefan almost everyday when I was growing up. Every time I hear a song by Gloria Estefan whether its her song "Turn The Beat Around" or "Conga" it reminds me of my dad when I was growing up. I remember sitting on christmas eve in my home listening to her album being played all over the house. With my whole family at my house having a great time singing and dancing. Her music takes me back to a time I always will cherish and never forget. I still listen to her music today whenever I can because of the fond memories I have associated with her songs. 

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=RBM3RlgjhQQ

Challenge Check in #1

The challenge I intend to work on in the coming week is 4b. I will be analyzing Kanye West - runaway and JayZ- Picasso baby. I plan to complete the assignment by watching both films closely and analyzing them first. I chose this challenge because I have seen the Kanye West "Runaway" music video before, and it has intrigued me. I want to be able to compare it to other short films.